aur bhi bahut kuch luta chuka ho iss dil k ielawa
yeh bataha yaaron ne ishq farmane k baad
iss liye kamre ki her ek cheez chupa leta hon
ek tere aane se pehle
ek tere jaane k baad

cant any one give coments about my poetry plzzzzzz

unforgetable moment

The first time i saw you my knees felt weak

the further you moved the closer i wanted to sneak
i was lost in a dream i always wished to seek
nothing could awake me not even a thorns tweak

the rush of blood in my veins the skipping of my heart
the beauty i saw in you was seven worlds apart
i wanted to say "hello" i wanted to say "hi"
by the time i got near, you had wished your friend goodbye
i just smiled and thought may be next time i will try

that night i gazed at the moon and all i could see is you
i felt a bliss of true love that i never knew
i closed my eyes and plead to God
if he could give her a clue

I stood under the tree love struck hoping that you will pass by
holding a rose and a card wondering what to say if someone asks why?
then you transpired from a group of friends like a moon behind the clouds
i knew not your name, i knew not your where abouts

so what if i do not know your name
it was nothing to feel ashamed
for if you call a rose by any other name
it would still smell sweet and same

lost in the thoughts i realized she was almost near
my heart was sulking and sinking with a gripping fear
i had to say it now but i did not know how
i waved my hand to get her attention somehow

she started walking towards me wondering who is he?
i gave her the rose and said "you are so beautiful and sweet"
as the birds on the tree started to tweet.
she felt so speacial i thought, that her eyes filled with tears
she asked me not to move and said "please wait here,
i want you to meet my boyfriend he must be somewhere near"

I knew not what to say..my heart was split in two..
i was drowned in the ocean of love which was deep and blue
i looked up in the sky to hold on to someone i knew
God take me in your arms i pleaded
and i will never ask anything again from you

I left the place with a bleeding heart
but her memories would never part.

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1)
SUGAR IS SUGAR
SALT IS SALT
IF I LOVE U
ITS NOT MY FAULT

2)
DEEP IN THE OCEANS
CARVED ON THE ROCK
3 LITTLE WORDS
FORGET ME NOT

3)
DEEP IN THE OCEANS
CARVED ON THE ROCK
4 LITTLE WORDS
I LOVE U ALOT

1)
THE MOMENT I SAW U
IT FELT LIKE BELLS RINGING IN MY HEART
I WANTED TO HAVE A WORD WITH U
BUT DIDN'T KNOW FROM WHERE TO START


2)
SOMETIMES U DO
SOMETIMES U DID
I LOVE U BECAUSE
U TALK LIKE A KID

3)
YOU'RE THE AIR THAT I BREATHE
YOU'RE THE WORDS THAT I READ
YOU'RE THE LIGHT THAT I SEE
AND YOUR LOVE IS ALL THAT I NEED

1)
THERE ARE MANY COLOURS
AND THE BEST ONE IS BLUE
THERE ARE MANY FRIENDS
AND THE BEST ONE IS YOU

2)
YOUR VOICE IS LIKE A CUCKOO BIRD
WHO SINGS AS HAPPILY AS CAN BE
LISTEN EVERYONE THE SONGS OF LOVE
WHICH SHE SINGS FOR ME

3)
DOST TERI DOSTI PAR HUSN KAA NOOR HAI
HAATH MILAANA CHAHTA HOON,
MAGAR RAASTA ABHI DOOR HAI

1)
LOVE HURTS WHEN U BREAK UP WITH SOMEONE
IT HURTS EVEN MORE WHEN SOMEONE BREAKS UP WITH U
BUT LOVE HURTS THE MOST,WHEN THE PERSON U LOVE
DOESN'T LOVE YOU.

2)
IT MUST HAVE BEEN A RAINY DAY
WHEN U WERE BORN,
BUT IT WASN'T RAIN
IT WAS THE SKY
WHO WAS CRYING BECAUSE
IIT LOST ITS MOST BEAUTIFUL STAR
AND THAT WAS

-----*~`~*don't luv 1 don't luv 2 luv the 1 who luvz U!*~`~*-----

`*~if kisses were leaves i'd give u a tree, if hugs were rivers i'd give u a sea, if time were time i'd give u an eternity~*`

*&* I luv the "y" I luv the "o" I luv the "u" and that's why i love YOU*&*

``~~``If I could rearrange the alphabets I would put U and I together``~~``

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paal paal teri yaad aaye
paal paal tum mujhe sayaae
tord the' mera dil ko kyon
chord the ho mera haanth ko kyon
aab mujhe na tardpa
aaj mujhe aapna bana
dil mei baasalo
mere aansu ko rukvado
saanse mei baas jao
mere pyaas ko bhujha jao
pyar ki dhun
dhyan se suun
shayad tum samaj jao ge
mei tumse pyar karti hun
paar kabhi bata nahin saakti hun
kahin ye dosti nafarat mei badal jaye
kahin ye dard aur bardh-ti jaye
tum mujhe chaho ya na chaho
ye to samaj
tumne jho aaj jalayi hai mere dil mei
mei usse samaal ke rakungi
jab taak tum hameesha ke liye mere saath nahin aaye
ye aaj hogi jho tumhe bulaye

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